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SimTopi [ updated 2010-08-21]
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Mela Offline
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SimTopi [ updated 2010-08-21]
Hi every, I know I'm new here but I figured I'd just go ahead and post my story. I was initially going to wait until I finished the next chapter (which should be really soon, if not today), but I thought it'd be nice to get some feedback on what I have before I continue.

I actually don't have a great title for the story because it originally started off as just a neighborhood legacy commentary (not a challenge!). Since I'm moving on to Sims 3 for a true legacy challenge, I wanted to write a story surrounding my generation 3 characters. So far, I've really been having fun doing it.

I don't think you will need to read the previous generations to follow what's going on here, though it may help to get a background on some of the characters.  Also, though there will never be anything too gratuitous, there will be coarse language, violence and other mature themes.

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Anyway, I do appreciate all kinds of feedback, good or bad. I'm not fragile, I prefer honesty above all else. Smile 

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07-04-2009 04:17 PM
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Wooo violence and coarse language! lol.

Well it sounds really interesting, I need to leave for work now so I can't read it, but it's definitely on my list Big Grin Will comment back in future Big Grin

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07-04-2009 04:19 PM
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Re: SimTopi Generations
Jessie's right; it sounds very interesting, and I can guarantee you that when I have some more free time, I'll be reading. Wink

07-04-2009 05:16 PM
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Thanks. I hope you enjoy it when you get around to it. Smile

Chapter 3 is up now. Whee!

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07-05-2009 12:37 AM
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Wow, this is a really great series so far. You've definitely improved since the first generation. Smile

I can't wait to see what happens next with Willow, and her brothers and Jasmine and Ceclia.
07-05-2009 05:03 AM
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Thanks again, Nicole. I friend-ed you back on LJ. Big Grin

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07-05-2009 04:47 PM
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I commented on LJ but I wanted to say here that this story is amazing. Smile I'm super excited to see how everything ties into the mystery of the prologue.

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07-06-2009 01:16 AM
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I read the prologue, and it's quite good.

I went ahead and added you on LJ and left you a comment, I hope that's alright. Smile

07-06-2009 02:11 AM
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Thanks for reading! I've added you back too Smile

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07-06-2009 05:14 AM
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Hello! I'm going to comment on LJ from now on, hope you don't mind. Smile Oh, and I friend S2WG people, so I friended you already! ^^

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07-06-2009 10:59 AM
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That was freakin' amazing O_O. I enjoyed Willow's story most. I find it the most interesting, the charms, the vampires, the dark allies...  the Grim Reaper, hehe.

I loved it, I really can't wait for more.

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07-06-2009 01:31 PM
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Ning I added you back. Smile And thank you so much SnoopshySarah. I'm hoping to get the next chapter up in a few days.

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07-06-2009 11:20 PM
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Okay, probably not the most appropriate place for this but DUDE! I didn't realize this until now but I totally downloaded your Server Down apartments. They are awesome, I used them in the Round Robin...weird. Very very weird. But cool. Yea, awesome, just wanted to say that Big Grin

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07-08-2009 05:50 PM
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Haha, that's good to know. Smile I'll totally have to check it out. 

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07-08-2009 08:26 PM
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Well I just got caught up and holy moly! It's really good, very interesting Smile I'm really in to the story, and I love how you've set up your scenes. The sparring scene was very interesting. That must have been so fiddly. lol. Great, great great. I'm very excited for more updates. Smile

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07-09-2009 02:07 AM
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