Hi every, I know I'm new here but I figured I'd just go ahead and post my story. I was initially going to wait until I finished the next chapter (which should be really soon, if not today), but I thought it'd be nice to get some feedback on what I have before I continue.

I actually don't have a great title for the story because it originally started off as just a neighborhood legacy commentary (not a challenge!). Since I'm moving on to Sims 3 for a true legacy challenge, I wanted to write a story surrounding my generation 3 characters. So far, I've really been having fun doing it.

I don't think you will need to read the previous generations to follow what's going on here, though it may help to get a background on some of the characters.  Also, though there will never be anything too gratuitous, there will be coarse language, violence and other mature themes.



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Anyway, I do appreciate all kinds of feedback, good or bad. I'm not fragile, I prefer honesty above all else.  

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Wooo violence and coarse language! lol.

Well it sounds really interesting, I need to leave for work now so I can't read it, but it's definitely on my list Will comment back in future

You can call me Jessie or, if you're special, JessICK!ar

Jessie's right; it sounds very interesting, and I can guarantee you that when I have some more free time, I'll be reading.

My Sims LJ

Thanks. I hope you enjoy it when you get around to it.

Chapter 3 is up now. Whee!

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Wow, this is a really great series so far. You've definitely improved since the first generation.

I can't wait to see what happens next with Willow, and her brothers and Jasmine and Ceclia.

Thanks again, Nicole. I friend-ed you back on LJ.

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I commented on LJ but I wanted to say here that this story is amazing. I'm super excited to see how everything ties into the mystery of the prologue.

I read the prologue, and it's quite good.

I went ahead and added you on LJ and left you a comment, I hope that's alright.

My Sims LJ

Thanks for reading! I've added you back too

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Hello! I'm going to comment on LJ from now on, hope you don't mind. Oh, and I friend S2WG people, so I friended you already! ^^

That was freakin' amazing O_O. I enjoyed Willow's story most. I find it the most interesting, the charms, the vampires, the dark allies...  the Grim Reaper, hehe.

I loved it, I really can't wait for more.

Ning I added you back. And thank you so much SnoopshySarah. I'm hoping to get the next chapter up in a few days.

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Okay, probably not the most appropriate place for this but DUDE! I didn't realize this until now but I totally downloaded your Server Down apartments. They are awesome, I used them in the Round Robin...weird. Very very weird. But cool. Yea, awesome, just wanted to say that

You can call me Jessie or, if you're special, JessICK!ar

Haha, that's good to know. I'll totally have to check it out. 

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Well I just got caught up and holy moly! It's really good, very interesting I'm really in to the story, and I love how you've set up your scenes. The sparring scene was very interesting. That must have been so fiddly. lol. Great, great great. I'm very excited for more updates.

You can call me Jessie or, if you're special, JessICK!ar